Okay right now the Hobbit has gotten a little more interesting. Actually it has become a lot more. Bilbo(the hobbit) and his dwarf friends have started on this adventure but Mr.Complain like crazy(Bilbo) complains and complains. Many things happen until the point where I'm at now. So Bilbo and his buddies have been running from these goblins. They are really weird. Well, Bilbo just does something stupid ,trips and falls, and now no one can see him cause he's wearing this shiny ring with some power.
Then Bilbo wakes up out of a coma or whatever and does something somewhat smart. Starts going some where. Well, its smart because, you see, if he stayed there he probably would have rotted to death. OR maybe just die and then rot. Well eventually he meets an illiterate flesh eating thing named Gollem who has a soft spot for shiny rings. To prove to Bilbo how stupid he is he speaks in third person until Bilbo has some riddle off with him which could have lasted forever unless Bilbo hadn't been cheap and said the cheapest riddle ever.
In the end Bilbo beats Gollem up like he should have when they first met. this chapter left me with some thoughts and opinions. I'll do it in FAQ form. Number one: What do you think about the dwarfs? That they are using Bilbo and should forget about their golden treasures because they don't deserve them. Number two: What do you think about the riddle off between Gollem and Bilbo? That, even though it is the highlight of the story so far because the riddles are interesting, its as pointless as the rest of the book. Question three: What characters do you think could be deleted from the storyline? All of them exept ,Gollem. I like losers that eat anything they see( because I like eating and eating everything and so does Gollem), but that would completely delete most of the chapter so I think that it should stay the way it is.
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Hi Brando!!!!! I am back and glad to see that your book is getting better. But people fall in every movie, book whatever. It kind of bugs me how people always have to fall. I mean seriously i can not watch one movie without seeing someone fall really. Hobbit is such a funny word, isn't it? The Hobbit sounds somewhat like Lord of the Rings. Is that what it is suposed to be like? i don't get it. Well i might right back or switch to someone else ttyl.
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